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Post by Vadarth on Nov 29, 2008 12:57:45 GMT -5
lol, thank you!
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Post by Vadarth on Nov 29, 2008 13:18:48 GMT -5
Once again, sorry for the double post, but...
I have an Announcement to make. As you can all see, I have changed the title. That is because I have decided to make The Foretold into a trilogy. Well, that's all for now!
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Post by Tania "Windwatcher" Sky on Nov 29, 2008 14:27:00 GMT -5
lol. I bet Tails thinks he is having halucinations. He's not, is he.
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Post by Tania "Windwatcher" Sky on Nov 29, 2008 14:27:37 GMT -5
Oh, and I finished Sonic Unleashed last night. XD
Sorry for the 2x post.
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Post by Vadarth on Nov 29, 2008 14:28:22 GMT -5
Nope. That was a nice chapter, eh? Ended with three cliff-hangers, hehehe...
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Post by Vadarth on Nov 29, 2008 14:28:51 GMT -5
...Nuts, another double post.
I had a feeling, lol.
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Post by Tania "Windwatcher" Sky on Nov 29, 2008 14:46:11 GMT -5
lol. How could you guess?
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Post by Vadarth on Nov 29, 2008 14:51:29 GMT -5
I'm psychic! Chapter 8 2 Mobius – Rosetropolis – Sewer System Espio, Knuckles, and Sonic walked on through the dark muck of the sewer systems in silence. Espio and Knuckles were tense, while Sonic was totally relaxed, his arms crossed behind his head. He was even tempted to start whistling, but, thankfully, he didn’t. “We are here,” Espio said. Knuckles looked up and saw a pothole. He jumped up and hit the ceiling with his knuckles, sticking them there. He then slowly and carefully opened the pothole and went up through it. Espio went after and Sonic jumped up last. When they were all on top Espio said, “This is where I leave you two.” He turned invisible and jumped through the pothole. Knuckles then put the cover back on. “Come on,” Knuckles said, “Lets get you into the castle.” 2 Mobius – Freedom City – Eggman’s Base Eggman watched as his nephew, Snively, worked hard with the other robots. Eggman advised them from time to time, but for the most part he remained silent. “I hope this will work. It must, for I have a feeling that when the time comes, Sonic will not.” Eggman put his hand on his head, sighing. 2 Mobius – Rose Castle Knuckles waved at Sonic. “From here on out you are alone. Don’t trust anyone, and remember: you are an evil, cold-hearted *******.” With that, Knuckles left. Sonic took a breath and raced up the castle wall, up to an open window. He jumped in and stopped to look around. No one was in this particular hallway. Sonic breathed a sigh of relief and walked on, looking for Queen Rose. “I-I’ve told you all I know!” cried the rabbit. The hedgehog standing in the darkness frowned, but continued to watch Queen Rose enjoy torturing this rabbit. “Oh, come on, Vanilla, just tell us and we’ll stop. In fact, we’ll let you go.” Vanilla cried out as Queen Rose cut her knee with a sharp knife. “J-just leave me alone! I g-g-g-gave you my daughter already! You said you’d let me go!” Queen Rose smiled and responded with, “Oh, but we did, though you we didn’t specify for how long.” Queen Rose then made to gut Vanilla with the knife, but Vanilla shrieked, “OK, OK! I’ll tell y-you…” Queen Rose smiled and said, “Good. Now where is it?” Vanilla stuttered, “I-it’s in the very middle of the G-G-Great Jungle. It’s-s hidden by invisibili-t-t-ty…” Queen Rose was now very happy. “Thank you for your assistance.” She then motioned to the two guards standing by. “Take her and drop her into the Red Pit.” Vanilla immediately started screaming and screeching at that. “You said you’d let me go-o-o-o…” she cried. “Yes, but I didn’t specify where.” Queen Rose laughed. As the two guards took Vanilla away, Queen Rose turned to look at the person in the darkness. “Would you please go and check out this now?” she asked in mock kindness. The figure in the shadows bowed and said, “Yes, your majesty,” in the same mock kindness tone of voice. The person then sped off like a speeding bullet. Queen Rose walked out of the prison in the basement of Rose Castle. She walked up the stairs and into a hallway, making her way to one of the many labs in Rose Castle, when she walked right into Sonic. “Watch where you’re damnit going!” she commanded, angrily. Sonic blinked a few times, looking at Queen Rose. ”Amazing…She looks just like Amy! And she’s so beautiful…” Sonic thought in a daze. Queen Rose was wearing a black, sparkly, and slightly translucent gown. Her hair was made into several bangs and she had red lipstick on. Also, she had a few shiny silver things in her hair. Another thing Sonic noticed was that she was wearing blue sandals. She had two rings on each hand, both on the same finger (the ring finger). The rings were yellow, blue, red, and green. Queen Rose said, “What are you still doing here? And what the **** are you staring at?” Sonic snapped out of his daze and said, “Uh, I forgot something.” Queen Rose, now suspicious, said, “Oh, did you now? Exactly what did you forget, hm?” “I didn’t eat yet…” said Sonic, cautiously. Queen Rose threw her hands up in the air and smacked her head. “Ugh, you and your apatite. Fine, but hurry up and finish. What that Vanilla said is probably incorrect, but whatever. Go and check it out anyway. Besides, maybe that’s why we didn’t find it in the middle of the Great Jungle anyway. Invisibility. Sure…” With that, Queen Rose walked away. Sonic breathed another sigh of relief as soon as she was gone, and decided to walk the way from which she came. ”Never mind what Eggman said, I’m not going near her again!” As Sonic walked, he thought about what he heard. ”Middle of the Great Jungle? Invisibility? Vanilla!?! Cream’s mother!?! What did she do to her?” Sonic quickened his pace and found himself walking down a few flights of stairs, and finding himself in the basement/prison of Rose Castle. He walked down the hallway, prison cells on both sides of him. Some were empty, others were crowded. Many were sleeping, others were glaring at Sonic. Sonic made I across the hallway without seeing Vanilla or Cream. He saw a guard and decided to ask him a question. Sonic almost started to ask when he remembered that the other Sonic is evil. “Tell me, where is the rabbit called Vanilla?” The guard looked with fear at Sonic and said, “O-oh, we took her to the Red Pit, r-remember?” Sonic frowned, for he did not know what the Red Pit was. He almost asked the guard what it was, but caught himself in time and asked a different question: “OK, where is the rabbit called Cream?” The guard, still obviously very afraid of Sonic, answered, “S-she’s in Lab #16, sir.” Sonic nodded and said, “Thank-uh, good. Now continue guarding this area, or else.” Sonic then left, all too aware that the guard had wet his pants. ENDING THEME #2: "Cross Game" - Alice Nine www.youtube.com/watch?v=0lGgfUwlTFoEDIT: Added second ending theme.
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Post by Tania "Windwatcher" Sky on Nov 29, 2008 14:58:12 GMT -5
lol. I feel sorry for that guard now. I think it's a good thing the Sonic lookalike doesn't seem much different from him.
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Post by Vadarth on Nov 29, 2008 15:01:47 GMT -5
Indeed. Hehehe, I can't wait to show you all Cream...
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Post by Vadarth on Nov 29, 2008 18:03:47 GMT -5
Chapter 9
2 Mobius – Great Jungle
A figure sped through the jungle, heading towards the very middle of it. The figure stopped when reaching it and took out a small object. The figure then pressed a button on the small object and threw it. It hit something invisible and caused the invisible structure to become visible. There, before him, was a huge, ruined Temple. “The Temple of Enria...” the figure whispered. The figure then sped off inside. After 10 minutes, there was movement outside the Temple…
1 Mobius – Great Jungle
Tails stared, completely shocked and confused. “Silver? What? Silvers? Uh? What?” The Silvers sighed and started to speak, but stopped and the one leaning on the tree spoke instead. “Yes, it is me – or us, it seems.” “But how? It makes no sense. How are there two of you?” The Silver sitting down now spoke. “I’m not sure. All I know is that I traveled back in time to stop another disaster, but ended up being sent back even further by Sonic. When I found myself back in this time, there was two of me.” Tails, still obviously confused, then asked, “OK, how did I get healed?” The Silver leaning against the tree answered, “We used this chaos emerald combined with our powers.” That Silver then held up a green chaos emerald. Tails nodded, then said, “OK, how will I tell you two apart?” The Silver sitting down pointed to his chest. On it was a paper with the number one. The Silver leaning against the tree had a paper with the number two on his chest. “We gave ourselves numbers,” said Silver2. “OK then, I have one more important question: what disaster are you talking about?” The two Silvers looked at each other, and then back at Tails, their expressions grim.
Knuckles screamed with agony as he forced his dislocated shoulder back into place against a tree. Knuckles panted heavily for a minute, then got up from his sitting position he had dropped into and looked around. “I guess I should find Amy,” he said to himself, and then ran off. Rouge watched from above. “What’s going on? Hm, maybe I should follow him…” Rouge took off and flew after Knuckles.
…System Reboot…Systems Damaged…78% Of Systems Damaged…Rebooting…Reboot 23% Complete…Reboot 34% Complete…Reboot 46% Complete…
Amy woke up next to a crackling fire. It was night all around. She found that all of her cuts and bruises were bandaged, and her hammer was lying in three pieces next to her. She had a blanket on. Sitting near but with his back to her was Big the Cat. Froggy was eyeing Amy, then jumped on her head. “Grrr, get off me!” Amy swatted her head, missing Froggy, who had just jumped off a second ago. Big turned around to look at Amy. “Oh, you’re up! You had a big fall. You lucky me and Froggy were here!” Amy sighed and muttered, “Sure…”
Eggman flew in his floating chair to Eggman Island. He input commands and watched as the Eggman Armada unfolded from deep within the island. “Ha ha ha! I shall now rule Mobius, now that Sonic is gone. Ha ha ha, this is the beginning of EGGBIUS!!!”
2 Mobius – Rose Castle
Sonic saw the door leading to Lab #16. He walked up to the panel on the right of the door. “Voice recognition, please,” said a monotonous voice. “Uh,” Sonic started when the monotonous voice cut him off, “Thank you. Eye scan please.” Sonic put his eye up against the scanner. “Fingerprint, please.” And so on. Finally, the door opened, and Sonic stepped into Lab #16. There were three scientists in the room, two of which were sleeping, and one of those two was also drooling. Sonic walked in and the awake scientist saw him. “Go,” Sonic said. “B-but I need-“ “I said go!” Sonic shouted, reluctantly, at the frightened scientist. The other two scientists woke up and saw their friend leaving. They then saw Sonic, and took off after their friend. The door closed behind them. Sonic walked around the lab. There were many computers and monitors. At the back there was three tubes, all were pitch black. There were panels in front of them. The one on the left read “No Captive”. The one in the middle read “Ixis Naugus – Transferred To Lab #23”. The one on the right read “Cream The Rabbit”. “Cream!” Sonic said. He looked for some way to get her out. Seeing none, he tried to break the glass, but when he hit it, he found out that it was not, in fact, glass, but titanium alloy. Sonic looked around the panel near the tube and found a button underneath it. Sonic pressed it and the tube opened. Also, an alarm was sounded all over Rose Castle. Sonic saw the unconscious Cream fall out of the tube and into his arms, yet she looked different. Cream looked older, 16 years to be exact. She was taller too, an inch taller than Sonic to be exact. Her skin was darker and there were scars in numerous places. “Whatever, I’d better get out of here,” Sonic said to no one. “Oh, you are not going anyvere,” said a Transylvanian voice coming from the door. Sonic looked and saw Tails, holding a weird looking gun and wearing one of those glass circles on one eye. “Tails! What are you doing! Let me go!” Tails smirked evilly and said, “You are not ze Zonic I know, so I zuggezt giving up, or elze I vill zap you.” Tails then aimed the gun he was holding at Sonic. Sonic tensed, ready to run, when Cream suddenly woke and jumped up. Cream jumped across the room and smashed Tail’s gun with her foot. It sparked and died. Her hand then glowed and she wacked Tails, sending him flying across the room, hit the wall, and slumped down, unconscious, bleeding from his head. Cream looked around and saw Sonic. “YOU!” she shouted, and ran to Sonic, at pretty fast speeds. Sonic dodged and Cream ran smack into the wall, unconscious again. Sonic, now very confused, carefully picked her up and ran out of Lab #16.
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Post by Tania "Windwatcher" Sky on Nov 30, 2008 14:35:16 GMT -5
lol. Ok, I could so imagine Cream doing that, but I'm very confused about how Tails talked.
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Post by Vadarth on Nov 30, 2008 15:23:26 GMT -5
Hehehe, just wait and see...
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Post by VadarthX on Dec 19, 2008 8:23:07 GMT -5
fail, talk to me later
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Post by Vadarth on Dec 20, 2008 18:05:43 GMT -5
...Jeffrey...My mortal enemy...I will find and kill you...
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