Post by Vadarth on Oct 24, 2008 15:18:07 GMT -5
I haven't written the first chapter yet, but here is a preview:
Sonic stood, facing Rose Castle. "Nothing like its name," Sonic muttered. Rose Castle was a dark and foreboding place. Surrounding by spikes, it had seven huge towers with many automatic turrets, defending the castle at all times. The rest of Rosetropolis was a dump, not the so called 'Utopia' Queen Amy Rose says it is. "Sonic, Sonic, do you read me?" came a static voice from Sonic's ear. Sonic touched the earpiece, then put his hand back down. "Loud and clear, Eggman," he replied. "Good, then proceed with the plan." Sonic nodded and ran. The turrets immediately started shooting, missing completely. Sonic jumped over the spikes and ran up the castle walls. Sonic jumped over and ran through the soldiers firing at him. "Sonic! Be careful!" Eggman said, not very helpfully. Sonic dove through the crowd of soldiers and did a homing attack at the door, breaking it. Sonic continued to run through the hallways when he found himself in a large, circular room. Robots fell from the ceiling. Dumb robots; not sentient. The robots opened fire on Sonic. Sonic took out a ring and charged at the robots, destroying them all. Sonic then 'flew' upwards and broke through layers upon layers of steel ceiling. Finally, Sonic broke through to fresh air. Sonic ceased spinning and looked around at his surroundings. A voice come from the shadows near him: "I see you made it, just as I expected." Sonic turned around to face the voice. "You and the Dr. Eggman may think you have the upper hand, but you don't; soon, we will have the Enria Crystal, and then nothing will stop us." Sonic smiled and said, "That's what you think!" The voice laughed, and replied, "No; that's what I know!" And out of the shadows stepped the owner of the voice: Sonic.
Like the preview? Doesn't it just make you want to know what the heck is going on? Itching to know what happens before and after this?
Sonic stood, facing Rose Castle. "Nothing like its name," Sonic muttered. Rose Castle was a dark and foreboding place. Surrounding by spikes, it had seven huge towers with many automatic turrets, defending the castle at all times. The rest of Rosetropolis was a dump, not the so called 'Utopia' Queen Amy Rose says it is. "Sonic, Sonic, do you read me?" came a static voice from Sonic's ear. Sonic touched the earpiece, then put his hand back down. "Loud and clear, Eggman," he replied. "Good, then proceed with the plan." Sonic nodded and ran. The turrets immediately started shooting, missing completely. Sonic jumped over the spikes and ran up the castle walls. Sonic jumped over and ran through the soldiers firing at him. "Sonic! Be careful!" Eggman said, not very helpfully. Sonic dove through the crowd of soldiers and did a homing attack at the door, breaking it. Sonic continued to run through the hallways when he found himself in a large, circular room. Robots fell from the ceiling. Dumb robots; not sentient. The robots opened fire on Sonic. Sonic took out a ring and charged at the robots, destroying them all. Sonic then 'flew' upwards and broke through layers upon layers of steel ceiling. Finally, Sonic broke through to fresh air. Sonic ceased spinning and looked around at his surroundings. A voice come from the shadows near him: "I see you made it, just as I expected." Sonic turned around to face the voice. "You and the Dr. Eggman may think you have the upper hand, but you don't; soon, we will have the Enria Crystal, and then nothing will stop us." Sonic smiled and said, "That's what you think!" The voice laughed, and replied, "No; that's what I know!" And out of the shadows stepped the owner of the voice: Sonic.
Like the preview? Doesn't it just make you want to know what the heck is going on? Itching to know what happens before and after this?