Post by endlessnight on Apr 1, 2009 20:33:12 GMT -5
Story:
It has been 500 long years, Iblis has been stopped, and so has Chaos. A new time of peace has finally begun. 1 year later, The world is in desperate need, the need that only one hero can provide, Sonic the hedgehog.
The 3 Lords of Mobius, Mephiles the lord of the Destruction, Shadow the lord of the abyss, and Omega the lord of order have went to war. Omega is the only one to fight against the two other Lords to protect Mobius.
Shadow has relied on total power, and has betrayed his civilians, nobody is strong enough to defeat him. Mephiles became a lord on his own because of his cause of destruction. People who serve Omega receive a decent amount of food but the rules are very strict, if even one law is broken it means death.
People who serve Shadow are very weak and have to work as slaves. People who serve Mephiles rely on power, and the powers of darkness. People who live away are either bandits or people who live underground peacefully.
But what happens when their peace is disturbed? Innocent lives are lost. A month later a time portal opened up to the past, those who entered it end up in the forest, leaving their past behind. Sonic and his friends are now in the future.
The seven Chaos emeralds have been divided out all across the world. One is not even in this dimension but is in the abyss. Now with Sonic's help the world may be save, but if Egg man and the rest of the bad guys come to the future the world maybe lost. You will have the choice to go to the Future or the past. Some may involve leaving ancient artifacts in the past to recover them in the future.
Humans have settled in a factory, beginning research they have brought good technology into this world that could save people in the past too. They've created monsters, brought aliens into this world by communicating with them. Built a defense system that can surprise many, seeing that it only took 1 weapon to kill one hundred soldiers.
So is this good enough or I need to improve it more?
It has been 500 long years, Iblis has been stopped, and so has Chaos. A new time of peace has finally begun. 1 year later, The world is in desperate need, the need that only one hero can provide, Sonic the hedgehog.
The 3 Lords of Mobius, Mephiles the lord of the Destruction, Shadow the lord of the abyss, and Omega the lord of order have went to war. Omega is the only one to fight against the two other Lords to protect Mobius.
Shadow has relied on total power, and has betrayed his civilians, nobody is strong enough to defeat him. Mephiles became a lord on his own because of his cause of destruction. People who serve Omega receive a decent amount of food but the rules are very strict, if even one law is broken it means death.
People who serve Shadow are very weak and have to work as slaves. People who serve Mephiles rely on power, and the powers of darkness. People who live away are either bandits or people who live underground peacefully.
But what happens when their peace is disturbed? Innocent lives are lost. A month later a time portal opened up to the past, those who entered it end up in the forest, leaving their past behind. Sonic and his friends are now in the future.
The seven Chaos emeralds have been divided out all across the world. One is not even in this dimension but is in the abyss. Now with Sonic's help the world may be save, but if Egg man and the rest of the bad guys come to the future the world maybe lost. You will have the choice to go to the Future or the past. Some may involve leaving ancient artifacts in the past to recover them in the future.
Humans have settled in a factory, beginning research they have brought good technology into this world that could save people in the past too. They've created monsters, brought aliens into this world by communicating with them. Built a defense system that can surprise many, seeing that it only took 1 weapon to kill one hundred soldiers.
So is this good enough or I need to improve it more?