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Post by caibel on Mar 11, 2008 20:17:16 GMT -5
=O THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY. I really want to see more. I REALLY like how you came up with Inferno's back story =) the entire story in general is very cool, I'm enjoying it a lot.
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Post by splitter on Mar 12, 2008 9:46:59 GMT -5
Chapter 13 - Infernos plans
Kingdom of Solania - Whites Lab White, Marine and Bruce had listened to Infernos story using the connection between Tails' and Whites computers, that was still intact, even though, otherwise Tails' computer was useless. White just listened half, but his cyborg-brain recorded everything. He worked on an interdimensional gate to Mobius, so he would be able to help out. Marine jumped around in panic. "What do we do, what do we do, what do we do, what do we do!?" "You shut up, I need to work!", White said harsh and let a few sparks flow between two cables.
In front of Tails' apartment "You're... responsible for Marias...?" "I swear, Shadow, it was only Gerald, I wanted to see dying. But the commanding general broke his word. He had promised to leave you two alone and just execute Gerald! But he also tried to kill you and Maria! And he succeeded." Shadow clenched his fist to control himself. "And what... are you going to do now... sister?" An untrustable smirk appeared on Infernos face. "First, my goal was to get out and being here with you. But as I felt all the power, the data I absorbed gave me, I wanted MORE! I need to rule this world and everything else, so no innocent will be killed anymore! I will unite every city, every country, every planet and every dimension under one leading rule: MY RULE!" Sonic and Shadow thought and said the same thing at the same time. "You're crazy!" Inferno laughed loud and evil but still feminin. "So what!? I will clean this world, even if I have to become sin itself to do so!"
Kingdom of Solania - Whites lab "Almost... almost... Got it!" Blue sparks flew around and created a gate, that appeared at the same moment in front of Tails' broken computer.
Tails' appartment Inferno was too busy with talking about her plans to notice the gate, that appeared in front of the computer. And she also didn't notice the hedgehog, the mole and the little racoon, that came out. After a big hello and a few introductions, the group turned back to the three hedgehogs.
Sonic had seen what happened, but Inferno floated with the back to the appartment. And she still had things to tell. "And I know, where I can get more power! I copied my virus programm! Right now, there are four spider-units in the net! Have fun with them! Exept for the fact, you want to join me in my plan." "No way!", Sonic yelled. "I would never team up with you!" Shadow kept quiet. He was between sides right now. On the one side stood Inferno, his sister, who had appeared out of nowhere and who Shadow actually had brother-feelings for again. But on the other side was the fact, that she was crazy. Also the fact, that she was responsible for Merias death, even though it has been an accident. And Shadows friends. And Amy of cause. It was hard. He didn't want to fight Inferno, but the thought of fighting his friends was painfull aswell. Memories and thoughts crossed his mind. One became stronger...
Flashback scene - 57 years ago - ARK - Shadows room "Shadow?" Shadow opened his eyes. He lay on his bed. His sister stood next to him. She seemed scared. She was young, looked like 7 years old. That wasn't surprising. She was created only two days ago. Her quick growing would stop, once she was in a bodyly age like Shadow. "What is it, sis?" "There is something outside.", Inferno whispered. Shadow stood up. His shoes made a clanging noise on the metal floor. He slowly sneaked to the door, Inferno was hiding close behind him. Shadow pressed the button to open the door. The automatic door slided aside and showed something blue outside the room. Not only blue, but transparent. It looked like a floating ball of jelly with tentacles and a metal head. Artifical Chaos. Shadow remembered the Professor telling about those experiments. Shadow turned around, crouched down and lay a hand on his sisters shoulder. He smiled calmly. "Those are just experiments, Infy, don't worry about them." "But... they're so... ewwy... and... Shadow!" Shadow already felt it coming. He spinned around, jumped at the experiment and punched it apart. The many, little Artifical Chaos were about to rejoin the rest of themselves. "Chaos... Spear!" Shadow hit about half of them, the others were forming a shorter Chaos. Inferno shrieked, as the tentacles reached for her. Shadow grabbed the tentacles and ripped them off. His next move was a spin-dash to the metal helmet, that was ment as a head. The experiment imploded and fell to the ground as small globe, not bigger than a marble. Inferno lay on her back on the floor in Shadows room, her eyes closed, the hands raised. "Sis... Hey, sis." She slowly opened her eyes to look into Shadows face. The door was closed. Inferno hugged her brother, tears in her eyes. "Shadow, thank you!" "C'mon, you can sleep in my bed this night."
"Shadow?", Inferno asked a bit later, as both lay in Shadows bed. "Yeah?" "Will I ever be as cool as you?" Shadow smirked and rushed her bangs. "At least." Inferno giggled. End of Flashback scene
Shadow clenched his fists harder. His eyes were forced closed. Tears ran down his face. "S-Shadow...?", Sonic asked. "Hey, Shad, wath's up?" Inferno had lost the crazy look in her eyes. "Brother?" Shadow suddenly smirked. "Hehe. Brother? I don't think so." He pointed at Inferno. "You're not my sister anymore! My sister died fiftyseven years ago, as she started programming the virus! She lost her life and her soul to YOU! You're just a virus, who killed the people, I was carring for! Just try to control the world! I will stop you! Together with Sonic!"
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Post by splitter on Mar 12, 2008 14:18:44 GMT -5
Chapter 14 - Shadows freakout Part I
"Y-You're pushing me away...? But, Shadow, it's me! Inferno!" "Yeah, right! Inferno would never do the things, you did!" The stings on Shadows armor bristled. The gun-runnings on his wrists moved a bit forward and made a sound like reloading guns. "You will pay! Finally I found the one, who is responsible for Marias death! I WILL TEAR YOU APART!" Shadow disappeared. Even for Inferno, who was draining the power of the Emeralds, he was too fast. He already had his spiked fist in her stomach. She coughed up blood. The emeralds fell to the ground. Shadow kept punching at his former sister. He ended his first phase with a kick into the side, that transportet Inferno into the next building. Inferno was stuck there, arms and legs outstreched. Shadow shot yellow energy from his palms, that held Infernos wrists and ankles in the wall. Shadow floated close to her. Anger and madness could be read from his eyes. He was barely able to hold his powers back. "You... took everything from me... I loved...!" Inferno looked up. Her bangs covered a part of her face. Blood came from the corner of her mouth. "Shadow... URGH!" Shadow had punched her into the stomach again. The next punch went to her face. Then a kick to her right arm. Something cracked and Inferno screamed in pain. A red aura now covered Shadows body. His anger and hate had given him insane powers. A chain of punches hit Infernos stomach and the next kick pressed her neck harder into the wall and almost strangled her. She cought up bloud again.
Amy stood on the edge of the destroyed appartment and was only held back by Blaze. "Shadow! Stop! Please!" "Amy, he can't hear you.", Cream said sadly. White tipped on Blazes shoulder. "Your majesty, your cybernaut-device version 2.0."
Blazes new armor looked exactly like her first one, except for the communication-device on her head and two thick, flatt stings on her device on the arm, pointing forward. She floated up to Sonic. "What do you say, Sonic? We have to hold him back.", she said through the rubber-mask. Sonic nodded.
Shadow punched again and again, making it hard for Inferno to feel anything else than pain. Then, Sonic grabbed his left arm and Blaze his right one. They dragged him back. "Whoa, chill there, Shad!" "Calm down, Shadow, that won't change anything." But Shadow now was realy riled up. He threw back Sonic and Blaze by using an aura-burst. he turned around to them. "Don't tell me, you're on HER side!" "No way!", Sonic replied. "But we still need her to answer some questions." "NONESENSE!" "Shadow, listen.", Blaze said, trying to appeal to Shadows common sense. "It won't bring Maria back if you kill Inferno now. It just makes no sen-" But in his current state, Shadow had no common sense. "SHUT UP! I kill who I want to kill! Don't try to stop me, or I'll KILL you too!" Sonic had never seen Shadow that mad before. Not even his freakout as he fought Sonic and the GUN-unit "Diabolon" had been this worse. Shadow powered up. The rings on his wrists blinked up and fell down. He disappeared. Blaze crashed into the wall next to Inferno. Even Sonic couldn't react fast enough, as Shadow hit him and let him crush into Tails' computer, that was broke anyway. Shadow had grabbed Blazes throat and pressed her into the wall. He raised his other hand. A chaos-ball appeared in it. "Die!" A plasma-sword-blade came from Blazes device. So that's why there had been those flatt stings, they were projecting the blade. Blaze slashed... into nothingness. Shadow was now on her right, kicking into her side.
"Sonic!" "Sonic, wake up!" "Blaze needs you!" Sonic opened his eyes. Tails, Cream, Amy, Marine, White and Bruce stood over him. Sonic got up, slowly. Shadow was too powerfull like that. How could he beat him? Something beeped in his ear. It was the communicator, that came with the new armor. The red scouter now showed the power of the people, Sonic saw. Blaze had a power of 254, Inferno was beat down to 68. Shadows power level showed 739. "Okay, does anyone have any bright ideas?" "I have.", Amy said and jumped into Sonics arms. "Take me to Shadow." Sonic blushed slightly. "What?" "Hurry! If someone can calm him down, then it's me!"
To be continued...
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Post by caibel on Mar 12, 2008 16:45:47 GMT -5
Very exciting and intense!
I hope Amy can calm Shadow down <_<
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Post by Tania "Windwatcher" Sky on Mar 12, 2008 17:46:11 GMT -5
@_@ I freaked out somewhere in the middle of that last chapter, but is was cool anyway!
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Post by splitter on Mar 13, 2008 14:01:10 GMT -5
Chapter 15 - Shadows freakout Part II
Shadow had his arms raised over his head, holding a big globe of chaos energy. Blaze hung in the wall, almost unconcious. She barely saw Sonic floating towards Shadow, Amy in his arms. What was that going to be?
"Will this work?", White asked, having his doubts. "She's even weaker than Sonic and Blaze." "Between Shadow and Amy is a strong connection.", Tails replied. "If someone can do it, it's her."
Infernos pain vanished. Only her right arm was still broken. Her healing powers would still have to improve. But she already felt the new powers, the viruses were giving her by draining the net. she looked up to Shadow. He was close to kill princess Blaze. That would make one score for Inferno. What a change of events. Inferno didn't plan to let Shadow go crazy, but it seemed to turn out good for herself. Her vision changed to red. Shadows power already had raised over 800. If he also was killing that Sonic-guy and all his other former friends, nothing was standing in Infernos way anymore. When Shadow calms down, she would just have to kill him. It broke her heart to think of that, but if he was against her, it had to be done. Her arm made a snapping sound. Healed. Inferno changed to normal vision again. What were those hedgehogs doing?
"Shadow!", Amy yelled. "Shadow, listen to me! Stop this nonesense!" Shadow didn't even turn around. Amy wanted to jump, but Shadow was too far away and if Sonic wouldn't have held her tight, she would have fallen hundrets of meters. "Shadow! Stop this!" Tears appeared in her eyes and she struggled against Sonics grip. "Get closer, Sonic! I have to reach him!" "It's too dangerous, Ames, no way I would bring you in that kind of danger." "Don't act stupid! This is Shadow! SHADOW!" Now, he reacted. He turned around, slowly, the Chaos Globe floating over his right palm. He just starred at them, without expression on his face. Amy leaned forward, Sonic brought her closer.
Infernos face was filled with disbelief. What she saw wasn't her liking at all. First it spoiled up her plans, second it was gross.
Amy had jumped at Shadow and had swung her arms around his neck. She pressed her lips on his and held a deep kiss. They stayed in that position for quite a while. Then, Shadow dropped the globe. It faded, before it could hit the ground. Shadow laid his arms around Amy and as the stopped the kiss, they looked into each others eyes deeply. "Ames... I'm sorry... I brought so much pain to everyone..." "I can see the reason. The true enemy isn't you but Inferno." "Right. Inferno." Shadow looked as his sister, who was still held in the wall by his Chaos Rings. Inferno gulped. That didn't go like expected. But she was fully healed and Shadows power had went down to normal. He even seemed a bit exhausted from that little amok run. His rings came back to him and clinged onto his wrists. Inferno grined. "Okay, so not Shadow but myself will seal your fate. YAAAH!" The Chaos Rings faded. The building part around Inferno was destroyed. She was floating there, a golden aura around her. Shadow lay Amy into Sonic arms. "Get the girls out of here. This is my fight." "Okay, Shad. I'm counting on you."
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Post by caibel on Mar 13, 2008 15:09:29 GMT -5
0_o Intense!!!
It's a good thing Amy was able to stop Shadow before something seriously bad happened. And boy, is Inferno sinister!
This is a very original story, congrats on every chapter you have done so far, I'm really liking it =)
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Post by Tania "Windwatcher" Sky on Mar 15, 2008 13:54:54 GMT -5
I agree with caibel. Who knows what could of happened if Amy hadn't been able to calm down Shadow?
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Post by daisuke on Aug 16, 2010 13:20:34 GMT -5
Hey guys, it's Splitter, author of Sonic Triumph. I happened to re-find this page and thought: I wonder if my fanfic is still here.
So, what I'm playing at is, that this is only the beginning of the story and that I would (perhaps) like to go on writing it. It's been 2 years and my english is much better by now and I freshed up on ideas. So basically, I want your thoughts: Should I pick the story up again or leave it?
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Post by Tania "Windwatcher" Sky on Aug 16, 2010 18:21:53 GMT -5
Pick it up! Pick it up!!! lol
BTW: I remember you now. XD Don't need to jog my memory!
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Post by cyborgfox on Aug 16, 2010 22:58:46 GMT -5
Why did the first few chapters remind me of Digimon? O.o Anyways... YAY SHADAMY~ Sorry I'm a fan...
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Post by daisuke on Aug 17, 2010 4:07:32 GMT -5
Why did the first few chapters remind me of Digimon? O.o Anyways... YAY SHADAMY~ Sorry I'm a fan... Maybe because... it was absed of the digimon movie? And I'm a shadamy fan too... Pick it up! Pick it up!!! lol BTW: I remember you now. XD Don't need to jog my memory! Too late ^^; But yes, I will pick it up if you say so.
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Post by daisuke on Aug 17, 2010 6:25:08 GMT -5
Chapter 16 - Showdown
Their fists colided, sending a shockwave through the area. A spining kick, again coliding, another shockwave. Punch, kick, kick, chop, blast! They crashed into buildings, recovering in mid-air and dashing back at each other, a punch, a kick. But this time, Inferno seemed to be slightly faster, her kick slammed into Shadows armor, cracking it. As he was pushed aside by the force of her attack, he used that to spin around quickly and launch his spiked fist at her head. Inferno caught his fist, held it with both hands and kicked his side several times, before throwing him to the ground. Shadow crashed into the asphalt, jumping right up again. The armor regenarated. "Dear brother, this is so sad! I wish, I could have convinced you! If only you had met me, before all of these weaklings! Shadow, the two of us were ment to rule!" "Shut it...", the hedgehog growled from between his clenched teeth. He raised his hand, one of the emeralds, which lay on the ground, floated towards him, shining in its bright green light. "Chaos control!" A kick slammed into Infernos back, but the way, her fall was headed, her brother already awaited her, sending an uppercut to her chin, followed by a strike with his forearm to the side of her head, then grabbing her by the throat. Inferno caughed, paralyzed by the beating she head to take. Where did all that power come from? How did Shadow regain all that strength after his outragous exhaustion? "You messed with the wrong people. You should have just stayed inside your egg!" Shadow drew back his fist, the spikes turned forward. "Shadow... why won't you listen...?" Something in her voice made him stop, hesitate for a moment. Exactly one moment too long...
Floating island From the edge, he had a good view. Down below, in the city, a giant spider had appeared and disappeared. And now, amazing amounts of energy were clashing. The percentage of chaos was high, the giant green gem glowed in its place, reacting to it. The guardian watched. He hated to watch and do nothing, but what good would it do to get involved? Nothing, that's right... He clenched his fist and slammed it into the ruin wall.
Central City "Tch... too bad." She let him go. The cracks in his armor opened further, as he droped to the ground motionless. She let her eyes slide up to the wrecked appartment, where she had awakened after such a long time, saw the shocked and angry expressions from afar. She dropped to her feet and picked up her brother. "Your right, Shadow. I should have stayed in the egg for a little longer. I wish, you could come with me but I'm afraid forcing you is no option. I'll kill all of your bothersome friends sometime later. I love you, big brother." She kissed his forehead and brushed a little blood from his mouth aside. She warped away.
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Post by daisuke on Aug 17, 2010 12:13:18 GMT -5
Chapter 17 - Back to the egg
GUN Central City Stronghold She didn't bother to take care of the bodies. The shockwave, that emmited from the center took them all out. There was a time when she would have been shocked by how she did things nowadays, but that time was far over. She grabbed the man by the shirt and threw him into the glass, before she could sit down in the commanders seat, crossing her legs. "How boring... everything in shades of grey..." She caught her reflection in the broken glass, which caused her to examine her body further. "I most certainly need a new attire... let's see, what I can do..."
Amy's house The kitchen was surprisingly big enough for all 7 of them: Sonic, White, Blaze, Tails, Cream, Marine and lastly Bruce, who had positioned himself behind his princess. Amy choose to stay with Shadow, who lay in her bed, recovering. Noone dared to say something. The sudden turn in chances during the battle had shocked them. How could have Inferno turned the whole fight around in the blink of an eye? "So.", Sonic finally said, killing the silence, "Anyone have a plan?" "Not a plan really", White mumbled, one of his eyes had a slight blue tan, "but a theory." Everyone turned to him. "You remember, what she said about the virus? That she had four units, that would continue to harvest data? Maybe that is, where she gets her power from." "Converting data into power?" Tails frowned. "Materializing data is one thing but turning it into pure power?" "Do you have another explanation? Well, no matter, if it is true or not, we need to stop those viruses anyway." "That's rediculous.", Blaze complained, "We couldn't go up against one in cyberspace, how are we supposed to stop four? Inferno took all the emeralds." Silence filled the room. Suddenly Cream started to interrupt. "Umm..." In the blink of an eye, all eyes were on her. "She took all the Chaos Emeralds." Sonic nodded. "Except for the one, Shadow has." Again, nodding. "But what about... the Sol Emeralds...?" Again, silence. After a few seconds, Tails and White rose from their chairs. It was about time to reopen the gate.
GUN Central City Stronghold Data surrounded her body, flowed closer and tighter, faster, until it couldn't be noticed at movement. The flow darkened, lay onto her body, covering her chest and hips in black fabric, that decended further down, creating a black dress and leaving a bare back. "This will do for now.", she sighed, leaning back in the leather seat, putting her legs onto the armrest. "All eggs should be like this..."
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Post by Tania "Windwatcher" Sky on Aug 17, 2010 14:47:05 GMT -5
Nice. I'm going to have to find time to reread the whole story(which'll be sometime hopefully this year. XD) But the chapters are GREAT!
BTW: If you hadn't realized it, I've started playing WoW. lol
And since I haven't said this yet: WELCOME BACK!! *glomp* rofl
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